Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts

Monday, January 18, 2016

Crush by Richard Siken...a review

“Tell me about the dream where we pull the bodies out of the lake
                                                                                and dress them in warm clothes again.
          How it was late, and no one could sleep, the horses running
until they forget that they are horses.
                    It’s not like a tree where the roots have to end somewhere,
          it’s more like a song on a policeman’s radio,
                              how we rolled up the carpet so we could dance, and the days
were bright red, and every time we kissed there was another apple
                                                                                                                        to slice into pieces.
Look at the light through the windowpane. That means it’s noon, that means
          we're inconsolable.
                                                            Tell me how all this, and love too, will ruin us.
These, our bodies, possessed by light.
                                                                                          Tell me we’ll never get used to it.”





I love this poem because it has a  more abstract meaning with lots of visual and sensory descriptions.  Reading this poem makes me taste fresh cut apples and cold lips. Every word is like a clue, a little piece of a bigger picture. 

" the horses running until they forget that they are horses"  God I love that line. 


Sunday, January 17, 2016

The Story of Us-- Something I wrote in my humanities class :)

Story if Us
Together, we created a world of destruction, you and me.
Built out of never wanting to fail
Our little dark house, dressed in grey
Filled with the ghosts of neglected houseplants
Filled with things that were yours and mine but never ours
Things that has seen the inside of suitcases
Been thrown from windows at 2 am
Broken and repaired and broken again
Placed back on shelves, never quite sitting the same. 
Hung back in closets overflowing with good intentions. 

Fading like a scar, healed but never gone. 
Memories frozen in flesh
They tell a story of how hard we tried
Draw a map to all of our soft spots
Places we cover with extra layers
Places we try to hide

One still night, when the wind could moan no more, we died
Gently rocking in deaths boney arms, we gave in. 
Both frozen in the winter of never wanting to change

Spring came after death was nothing new
We stepped out with new skin and long hair
Blinking eyes no longer liquid
Reborn as just patches of glare

Together we are like seedlings wrapped in fertile soil

Sprouting from the warm ashes of what we used to be.

Friday, October 7, 2011

Pablo Neruda

“ I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you simply, without problems or pride: I love you in this way because I do not know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you, so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand, so intimate that when I fall asleep your eyes close. Pablo Neruda

Thursday, September 23, 2010

Your Catfish Friend by Richard Brautigan


Your Catfish Friend
by Richard Brautigan
If I were to live my life
in catfish forms
in scaffolds of skin and whiskers
at the bottom of a pond
and you were to come by
one evening
when the moon was shining
down into my dark home
and stand there at the edge
of my affection
and think, "It's beautiful
here by this pond.I wish
somebody loved me,"
I'd love you and be your catfish
friend and drive such lonely
thoughts from your mind
and suddenly you would be
at peace,
and ask yourself, "I wonder
if there are any catfish
in this pond?It seems like
a perfect place for them."